Let’s Start a SKANDAL!

Last June, my little YA historical paranormal espionage thriller, SEKRET, sold to Roaring Brook Press/Macmillan Children’s. I am now thrilled to announce that there will be a sequel, tentatively called SKANDAL! Special thanks goes to Mandy Hubbard at D4EO for brokering the deal.

Obviously, I can’t tell you too much about the story, but I promise it will be full of much of the same awesomeness that I hope you all will love in SEKRET, as well as new twists: beatnik jazz lounges, a psychic sickness, underground tunnels, psychedelic records, British convertibles, and of course a vast conspiracy that threatens the world order of 1964. Also, kissing.

SKANDAL won’t be out until Spring 2015, but SEKRET will be here before you know it! I’m hoping to share the cover art and jacket copy with you all very soon.

#PitchWars – What I’m Looking to Mentor

This December, I’ll be mentoring one lucky writer for Brenda Drake’s PITCH WARS–and it could be you! If you haven’t heard about #PitchWars, it’s a great opportunity to work with an agented and/or published author and other industry insiders on polishing your ms and presenting it to an awesome collection of agents. Check out the link above if you’re interested in more information!

About Me

I’m Lindsay, a YA author and lover of all things nerdtacular. I’m a foreign affairs analyst in Washington, DC, but when I’m not working or devouring YA and fantasy novels, I love board games, obscure beer, and trashy paranormal “reality” shows. My first novel, SEKRET, is about psychic teens in Soviet Russia who are forced to spy on the American space program. It’ll be published by Macmillan Kids in early 2014!

What I’m Looking For

I’m looking to mentor YA writers, primarily those with a historical or fantasy ms. (Or a fun combination of the two!) On the historical side, I’m interested in stories from all over the world, in any time period, especially if you have a strong, compelling hook. I’m interested in both “pure” historical fiction and also historicals that incorporate other genres–fantasy, paranormal, thriller, speculative/alternative history, and more. (Steampunk Ramayana retelling? Time-traveling Augusto Pinochet?) While I’m open to any setting, I would love to see less-represented settings (pre-colonial India, Russia, and Persia are of particular interest to me), and I feel that a Tudor or Arthurian England story would really need an unusual twist to stand out.

On the fantasy side, I’m most interested in second-world fantasy. I’d love to lose myself in your rich, unusual world and root for your characters against insurmountable odds. I’m probably not the right choice for urban fantasy, but I do love a good historical story with speculative elements (see above). Again, I’d love to see something fresh and innovative in the genre–no pure-hearted farmboys sent on a quest in which they discover they’re the chosen one, please.

Overall, I’m looking for a vivid and original voice. I want your setting to come alive with the nuances of your chosen setting! While plot and pacing is important to me, I do prefer things slightly further on the “literary” side of the literary-commercial spectrum. But give me a story pitch I can’t refuse and use whatever elements you feel will make the best use of your amazing idea, and I’m sold!

YA Books I’ve Loved: Chances are good that if you feel your ms is a comparable title to these, I’ll be hooked:

Seraphina by Rachel Hartman
Born Wicked by Jessica Spotswood
Grave Mercy by R. L. LaFevers
The Girl of Fire and Thorns by Rae Carson
Chime by Franny Billingsley
Finnikin of the Rock by Melina Marchetta
Code Name Verity by Elizabeth Wein
Revolution by Jennifer Donnelly
Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor
Vessel by Sarah Beth Durst

And I will mud-wrestle another mentor for your ms if it’s a YA version of Scott Lynch’s The Lies of Locke Lamora!!!

Submissions start today (11/26) ! The cut off time to get your applications (query & first five pages of manuscript) in is 8AM EST on December 5.

Send your applications to brendadrakecontests@gmail.com. Writers can apply for up to 3 coaches. The coaches’ categories are set. Coaches can only consider the categories they’ve signed up for. Writers cannot apply for a coach that is not in their category.

For additional information about this contest go HERE.

·        This is open to finished manuscripts only.

·         You may only enter one manuscript.

·         Only the genres requested by each coach will be considered for the contest.

Formatting…

Subject line: Pitch Wars Application: Coach Name you want to apply for: Title (Example: Pitch Wars Application: Lindsay Smith: GONE WITH THE WIND)

Make sure you put my name, Lindsay Smith, in the subject line if you want me to consider you for mentoring!

In the body of the email:

Name: Your Name

Genre: The genre of your manuscript

Word Count: The word count of your manuscript

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REMINDER: You can send an application for up to 3 coaches.

Check back soon for a complete list of the amazing agents participating in the contest. There’s over a dozen!

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Chasing Good Enough

I think that I have this belief with writing, and other areas of my life besides, where if I beat my head against the same wall for long enough my body will be forced to develop a thicker skull to endure said wall-beatings like this one guy with an extra-thick cranium we saw on some Stan Lee show about real-life superhumans who could drive nails into boards with his nog.  This is not to say that I have unparalleled focus and perfectionistic tendencies, but rather that I’m a stubborn sumbitch to the detriment of all the other perfectly lovely walls I could be beating my head against instead.

My attention/focus pays for it the worst, of course. I am trying to force no less than five different projects through the sausage grinder right now, and that’s not counting a couple of other rinky-dink things. I write one book on my lunch break, edit/rewrite another on my snack breaks, line edit a third when I’m at home, bite my nails awaiting editorial guidance on a fourth, and stare at/occasionally pet the outline for No. 5, which totally said yes when I asked it to go to NaNoWriMo with me this year. But then a sixth—sixth!—keeps tugging at my skirt, asking if it could maybe trouble me to draft up an outline for it, too, and oh it’s got this great friend I should really meet here’s the first sentence and just maybe I should think about it when I’m trying to fall to sleep if it’s not too much to ask.

So basically I forget characters’ names and everything else about them. I find them sneaking their way into different drafts here and there. Russians slinking through the streets of a fantasy world. Buried templar treasure in your home room locker. If I can nudge this story along ever so incrementally, then I can get it out of my head long enough to toy with something else.

Then everything hits this bottleneck where I edit endlessly because everything sucks and nothing works.

I have two mss that are probably nigh sick of me and ready to leave the nest, but the longer I leave them unopened the more afraid of them I become, as if they’re mutating whenever I turn my back on them. What do I think? That if I just wait a few months, the Better Writer Me of the Future will waltz along and make them perfect? BWMotF has her own BWMotF lurking around the bend. When do we declare ourselves good enough? I peek between my fingers at SEKRET and wonder how it ever sold. I think about fat fantasy ms and can’t believe it ever got an agent. Then I start rewriting again.

How do you make yourself move on? Do you just hit send?

This Is the Part

This is the part where it all comes together.

Except for that character who wandered off 6000 words ago and hasn’t been seen since—I’m hoping she’ll show up just in time to spring me out of a corner I’ll inevitably paint myself into.

And except for the major worldbuilding change I made that will pretty much require me to rewrite the first five chapters, but it’ll be worth it in the end.

This is the part where we learn how my leads really feel, which of course in no way shape or form reflects everything they’ve said or done or thought leading up to this point, but I can fix that later on, right?

This is the part where I drop that bomb, that bomb that goes right before the separator page with the big-ass bolded PART III on it, the bomb that they’ll spend the next 15,000 words defusing, except that I kinda set off little tiny bombs way too early in Part II because I got really excited, and they made that sound like those twisted paper firecrackers that come packed in sawdust, and it was really fun but I’ll have to clean them up because I NEED THIS BOMB TO BE HUGE.

This is the part that I wrote this book for. I think. I mean, I like all the parts, but I’m kind of hating the whole hulking, hammered-on mess right now with like support beams surging out of thin air and top floors wider than the bottom ones and I probably shouldn’t poke at it too much, but it’ll be pretty someday. I swear.

This is the part where I can take a deep breath and walk away and pretend none of this ever happened, and maybe, maybe I can forgive myself for doing so someday.

But I won’t. I can’t. I have to go forward. I have to write this part. And finish it, once and for all.

Too Nice or Too Phony?

I guess some people are concerned that our writing and reading community has gotten “too nice,” like that’s a thing that people can be. But I feel like what they really mean is that we’re too inauthentic when we talk about others’ writing. We say we love so and so’s books when they secretly make us gag and wonder HOW the HELL this NITWIT got a seven-figure book and movie deal.

This is not the same thing as being “too nice.” In fact, I’m pretty sure this is straight-up “lying.”

I am not a nice person. (I recently suggested blurbing a friend’s book as “Even I liked this book!”–Not A Nice Person.) I was seriously disappointed by that movie everyone else found faultless, and I’m always, always mentally editing ever book I read. I have strong opinions on quite likely trivial matters, and even a few non-trivial ones.

But I subscribe to the philosophy that, unless directly asked by the person in question, if I don’t have anything nice to say I won’t say anything at all. (Cue childhood perforated with awkward silences immediately following pointed questions.)

So when I talk about something I like, my enthusiasm is genuine. It may not mean the subject is flawless, but the awesome bits are so ridiculously awesome that they overcome whatever I didn’t like. I am a legit fangirl, cheering it along, loving it scars and all.

This is not being nice, and certainly not too nice. This is being genuine. Because for every book I rave about, there were probably five to ten others I read that ran the gamut from “pretty good” to “dear god what grievous sin have I committed to deserve such punishment.”

And maybe if I were strictly a reviewer, I’d discuss those books, too. I applaud those reviewers who can calmly weigh a books merits and flaws, and dispassionately present their case for whatever score they gave. But as a fellow writer, what’s the point? This person isn’t my crit partner. They didn’t ask me my opinion, which could all too easily be misconstrued as an attempt on my behalf to put myself above them in some ridiculous writerly power jockeying. And even if they agreed 100% with my criticisms, what the hell are they going to do about it? Book’s already in print.

And maybe that’s the crux of it–reviewers are there to guide other readers, but as writers, our words seem aimed at other writers. We are talking shop, whether we mean to or not. We aren’t Neil Degrasse Tyson making astrophysics accessible to one and all–we’re Neil Degrasse Tyson and Michio Kaku duking it out about dark matter over a thirty-year single malt.

(I don’t know if that’s a thing that ever actually happened, but I would pay good money to see it.)

So, please, don’t be inauthentic. If you’re comfortable speaking up and criticizing something, more power to you, but you shouldn’t feel ashamed if you only want to pipe up when you have genuine love to give. Of all the things you can get angry about on the Internet, being “too nice” really shouldn’t be one of them.

Block to 2K, Week 4: Keep Moving

Are your word counts soaring yet? Are you getting into the flow, writing for longer sessions, putting more words to paper? Are you anywhere near the daily or weekly goals you’ve set for yourself?

No?

Don’t despair. Even if you’re not where you want to be, I’ll bet you’re accomplishing more than when we started this examination of our writing habits. Accept the failures and keep moving forward.

Much like when you write that first, painful, awkward, execrable draft. How badly did you want to go back and revise it as you went? You fell deep into the desperation that comes with endless revisions. You thought you’d never reach the end, because you kept changing, cutting, completely overhauling what you’d already written!

We can’t change the past. We can only keep moving forward.

You can’t fix the days that you didn’t write, or the days you wrote abysmally. But you can change what you write—once you actually have something on the page that can be changed, that is. So get it on the page. One word after the other. Resolve to write more the next day than you did the last. Think of your writing development as continually compounding interest. As long as you keep putting words into your book, it’ll grow into a book, little by little.

Keep moving forward.

Try something new. Write somewhere different. Start a new story—you know the one, the one that keeps rattling around in your head when you’re trying to write something else. Give it a voice, just for a minute, then cut to the judges for their scores: Proceed? Or go back to the first story? Either way, you’re writing. You’re growing. You’re moving forward.

And little by little, you’ll find you’re doing more than you were before.

As for me, my goal through this experiment was to reach the point where I could write at least 2,000 words a day, 5 days a week. I’ve had quite a few 2K days, but not as many as I’d like. Still—I’m writing more than ever before, and I’m hacking away at that fear that grips me every time I fire up a blank page. I’m learning how to confront that fear two to three times a day, rather than praying for all the planets to align for that once-a-while time that the fear was back in its box. The fear will always be there, but I have a strategy now. I know how to shake its hand, then politely ask it to move out of the way.

Keep writing.

And let us know how you’re doing! What tweaks you’re using to discover your optimal writing time, or how you’re setting yourself up to get into the flow. What’s keeping you motivated, and what’s tamping down that fear? I’d love to know.

Block to 2K, Week 3: Flow

Yes, I know I technically gave you two weeks to work on Week 2, but it was the holidays, and I let the blog slide in favor of cranking out some serious wordage. Okay . . . some somewhat-serious wordage. Hm. Well, I had a couple days over 1K. I’ll count that as a win!

For today’s Block to 2K, we’re going to begin the dreaded PUSH to bring up our average word count and extend our writing sessions, even if by just a few minutes. I know, I’m cringing at the thought of it too—I’d love to write more, but I don’t know if I can. If this were a 5K run, I’d be lagging in the back, sweating profusely and wheezing. But that’s why we’re not going to jump into it all at once: we’re going to get the right equipment, and we’re going to condition ourselves so we can prance through that run without breaking a sweat.

We’re starting with the concept of FLOW. Don’t let the trippy graphic scare you off:

Image courtesy Wikipedia via Creative Commons

Flow is the term coined by Mihály Csíkszentmihályi (I can’t make up consonant clusters like that) to describe the mental state when you fully immerse yourself in a task, keeping up a good energy level and propelling yourself forward without distraction. MC believes that the ideal conditions for flow occur when you feel like you are competent enough to achieve a task, but still feel sufficiently challenged by it, as demonstrated by the chart above.

I think writing offers us the perfect opportunity to achieve flow—we know our stories, we trust our words or at least our ability to make them better later; but we also don’t always know exactly what a story will bring next or how to solve each challenge in the tale that arises. In short, we feel competent, but challenged.

. . . Ideally, anyway. Sadly, these two elements rarely fully line up, at least not for long. Either we get disgusted with our words, or we get blocked on the story, or we lose our grip on what we thought we were reaching for.

So let’s talk about that competency part for a minute. A big part of what we did in Week 2 was look at our emotional state when we’re writing, and figure out what circumstances—times of day, etc—contributed to the most productive writing sessions. I can’t help you with your writerly self-esteem; I believe that has to come from within. But reminding yourself of how much you’ve accomplished with your writing so far and how excited you are for the story you’re about to tell never hurts.

But we need some more practical equipment in our competency toolkit, too, and I think that comes from jotting out a rough outline prior to each writing day or writing session to hit all the high notes of the next few scenes you want to write. We so easily fall off the competency wagon when we don’t know what’s coming next. This may sound silly, but I also tend to get so hung up when I’m trying to think of the right names and terms for things, or can’t remember a particular fact, or anything I’d have to stop writing to look up. If it doesn’t come to me while writing, I’ll just toss a note to myself in brackets and keep truckin’ on.

Now, what about the challenging side? Well, we don’t want to make our outline too detailed, or we might lose interest—the exploratory spirit. (Your results may vary, but I’ve definitely found this to be the case.) We also can’t feel like we’re treading water. Challenge yourself to reach for a particular milestone in the story before you cease writing, or hit one of the moments in this story that you’ve been dying to write ever since you first envisioned it.

And for an added challenge . . . Yeah, you knew this was coming. We’re going to start pushing ourselves to write more words, and write for longer periods. I’d say that for every ten minutes you’re able to make yourself write in one go, set a timer for that time plus two additional minutes when you sit down to write and keep the words moving until the timer goes off. So if you can usually write for twenty minutes straight, you’d set it for twenty-four, and so on. If you worry more about your word count speed, challenge yourself to squeeze an extra twenty to fifty words, average, into every ten minutes you write. If you take care of the competency portion to get you going, use this challenge to keep you motivated, and in the flow.

Please comment below to let me know how you’re doing with the challenge, blog about your experience, or as always, tweet about the experiment with the hashtag #b22k. Good luck!

3 Things That Rocked: Catching Jordan

Miranda Kenneally rocks, y’all. I have the pleasure of knowing her in real life, and this gal is every bit as sweet, funny, and real as the characters she writes. (She’s also always game for drinking a gin rickey, so major kudos there.) But—this is so embarrassing—even though I’d had CATCHING JORDAN on my to-read list since first hearing about it (and who wouldn’t! GIRLS PLAYING FOOTBALL!), I still hadn’t read it after hanging out with her several times. I finally took care of that, and tore through it one Sunday afternoon.

CATCHING JORDAN rocks, and here are three reasons why.

The boys. Miranda writes real, actual high school-aged boys. They don’t sparkle in the sunlight and unabashedly offer up their feelings. They have way more testosterone than their bodies are equipped to handle, and say stupid things, and play stupid games, and sometimes feel bad about it later, but not always as much as they should. They are legitimate teenaged creatures.

The South. Miranda nails this, too. Instead of smearing Tennessee with one y’all-colored brush, Miranda digs into the dynamics in a way that few writers manage. Jordan’s family lives in just the sort of over-the-top southern manse that you’d expect for an NFL family, new but eagerly tended to by a stay-at-home mom and fitted with only the most important elements: foosball tables and 4-wheelers.

But she hits all the other points on the spectrum as well, from weathered trailer parks to squinty little houses that only a realtor would call a “cottage.” And Jordan and her family, new to this moneyed world and essentially good ol’ boys and gals at heart, move seamlessly from the Tennessee Titans’ owner’s box to the muddy fields.

The characters. There are so many characters at play, and at first I thought I’d be overwhelmed by them, but each filled a crucial and natural role in the story, from Carrie the well-meaning cheerleader who always has Jordan’s back to all of Jordan’s teammates. I got so invested in the smaller dramas of who’d get scholarships to which colleges. And the ‘Bama coach. THE ‘BAMA COACHING STAFF. I would be slack-jawed in disbelief if it wasn’t so incredibly true of a certain kind of character one encounters in the South.

Miranda’s next book, STEALING PARKER, is out from Sourcebooks in October and I’m sure I’ll only love it more. (Baseball. Hot for teacher. Want.) Even if you aren’t a sports fan, give these books a chance.

Block to 2K, Week 2: Plan Your Writing

Hey, #b22kers! Did you track your writing this past week? If not, go check out that article, and commit to monitoring your progress—we have to understand how we write before we can find ways to improve our writing sessions.

Okay! Now that you’ve got about a week’s worth of tracking data, ranging from a quick and dirty log to an incredibly complex spreadsheet, it’s time to figure out your writing pattern. Are you clearing your schedule to sit down for one long stretch of furious typing, or are you jotting out your story on the back of receipts and notecards in random spare moments throughout the day? Somewhere in between?

Hopefully you’re able to sort out some kind of method to the madness. What we’re looking for are the conditions in which you are able to write the most words relative to time spent writing, and what factors may contribute to that. For instance, if you have a couple ten-minute sessions first thing in the morning where you crank out 400 words, but your evening writing sessions barely crack 200 in twice the time, we can safely say you work better in the morning. Likewise, you may find that your word count-to-time spent ratio increases or decreases the longer the individual writing session.

Granted, one week isn’t a huge data set, so it’s important to keep tracking, especially now that we’re going to introduce two new factors: we’re going to plan for our writing session, and we’re going to optimize our writing conditions. (Sorry, still no word on renting Clooney’s villa, but we’ll make do with what we can.)

Plan: From my earliest attempts at NaNoWriMo onward, I’ve found that doing a detailed bullet-point of everything I expect to happen in the next few thousand words makes the writing breeze by. I don’t outline extensively before writing a book—I usually have ten to fifteen key scenes I know I want to include, then string them up as I go—but figuring out what comes next is essential to keeping the words flowing, for me. Get as much writing prep work done as you can before actually sitting down to write.

Optimize: Start using the information you’ve collected to your advantage. If your word count peters out past the twenty-minute mark, then commit to writing in twenty-minute chunks, and give yourself time to plan and prepare in between. I rated my writing sessions highest between 10am and noon and between 9pm and midnight, so now I’m going to take a 15-minute writing break before lunch at work, and set a 20-minute writing timer before bedtime.

But keep experimenting, keep writing, and keep tracking. Because next week? Comes the push.

Post about your own experience with #b22k so far below, or let me know if you blog about the journey!

3 Things That Rocked: The Fault in Our Stars

Welcome to a new blog feature, “3 Things That Rocked.” I’ll pick a book I recently read and discuss 3 things that the book did really, really well—and examine ways we can use those techniques in our own writing. Enjoy!

WARNING: SPOILERS BELOW. If you haven’t read The Fault in Our Stars, quit reading this post and go order yourself a copy. Seriously.

Ceci n’est pas une pipe: this is not a pipe. Renee Magritte’s iconic painting launched an entire artistic movement, Dadaism, and its self-critical spirit lives on in John Green’s The Fault in Our Stars. This is not a cancer book. This is not a sappy YA love story. This is not a convoluted, self-referential yet self-deprecating tome of great consequence.

Of course, The Fault in Our Stars is all these things and more. I loved it for embracing these conventions even as it lashed out at them, derided them, fought against them at every turn. It’s such a wonderful, authentically young adult attitude to take.

This is not a cancer book. Our narrator, Hazel, hates cancer books: Nicholas Sparks tearjerkers, you name it. In fact, she finds the whole “cancer” thing pretty played out. Never mind that she’s had her ups and downs in her own battle, and finds her terminal diagnosis a matter of when, not if. Her cancer support network bears all the hallmarks of the Cancer Story: survivors comparing scars, mental and physical; the daily struggles of prosthetic legs and oxygen tanks and what tiny accomplishments bring the greatest reward; the Wish stories of how each Cancer Kid spent his or her charity wish; and then, of course, the heart-breaking third act of the book, when Gus’s cancer returns with a vengeance.

If ever there was a cancer book, The Fault in Our Stars is it. It is the cancer book. All other cancer books should go stand in the corner and think about what they’ve done.

This is not a sappy YA love story. Early on, when Gus and Hazel watch Isaac and Monica making out and whispering their hopey-dopey “Always” mantra to each other, they’re ready to hurl. And yet one simple word—“Okay”—becomes every bit as intense and meaningful for them as their relationship progresses. We all love to act jaded and annoyed by others’ romances, but when you lose yourself in crazy strong love, who can help but to fall into the exact same gag-inducing traps?

And Gus and Hazel are so honest with each other. Hazel never puts on a front for Gus because by the time she’s fallen for him, he knows her too well to bother. And for all his showmanship, Gus is about as genuine as they come. Then—“She loves him, he’s dying”—how cliché does it get?  Their story could easily have turned sappy, but instead, it’s just the right amount of knife-twisting, heart-breaking romance.

This is not a post-modern work of staggering brilliance. An Imperial Affliction, Hazel’s favorite book, is supposed to be–but crumbles under scrutiny (much like its deranged author). I’m kind of a sucker for books within books, and the fallibility of such consequential literature can be ham-handed but Green really pulls it off here in a way that laughs at himself before turning his laughter outward.

My only disappointment on this count is that The Fault in Our Stars didn’t end mid-sentence. I was so certain it would!

What factors of The Fault In Our Stars did you love? Have you thought about ways to incorporate them into your own writing?